“The Rule
of Old Blood” is a satisfying conclusion to the trio of novellas in Ross
Smeltzer’s recently published The Mark of
the Shadow Grove (2016). (The first
two were discussed in previous posts, see also Lovecraft
Meets Earth Mother and Cernunnos
and Shub-Niggurath). Though each story can stand on its own, the
three are artfully linked through recurring imagery, back story and theme. The author’s subject is an ambitious
one: illuminating the more horrifying
aspects of power struggles between men and women, as well as our hostile
relationship with Nature.
Smeltzer
suggests that these two conflicts are a reflection of the same underlying
decision: whether we interact as partners with the eternal feminine, as embodied
in the natural world, or attempt to exploit, dominate and compartmentalize her in a quest to shore up the masculine
ego and will to power. The author
signals his perspective very early in the book with an arresting dream image of
the vagina dentata. A strong feminist
and environmentalist sensibility informs all three novellas. Smeltzer succeeds
in translating ideas drawn from H.P. Lovecraft—and, in the case of “The Rule of
Old Blood”, Clark Ashton Smith—into a work that addresses contemporary fears.
Readers
familiar with Clark Ashton Smith’s dark fantasies will find elements in “The Rule
of Old Blood” that suggest homage to the visionary creator of Averoigne and
Zothique. A love of language and
allusion is evident throughout the book, but especially in the last
novella. As with the work of Clark
Ashton Smith, readers are certain to acquire new vocabulary, a beneficial side
effect. Because of Smeltzer’s book, I
have acquired the words odalisque—first
encountered in a Smith story—caryatid,
termagant, scofflaw and my favorite, exenterated.
The latter holds a position near an all-time
favorite, exsanguinated. Readers will not have to look up these latter
two to know they describe something really
bad.
Aspiring
writers are often exhorted to write short sentences, using the active tense,
and avoid obscure, multisyllabic words—that is, to write like Earnest
Hemingway. It will take decades to undo
this unfortunate advice. Slavish
devotion to this rule makes sense if the ambition is only to write product
manuals for an audience that reads at a sixth grade level or below. Effective creative writing must be free to
make generous use of the full range of vocabulary and grammatical forms available,
active and passive voice, short
familiar Anglo-Saxon words, and less familiar, foreign sounding terms containing
ancient but still powerful connotations. These tools allow for expression of
subtle emotions and nuances of thought and memory—ideally disturbing ones, in the context of horror literature.
Smeltzer
does not make overuse of obscure terminology, any more than Smith did. Exenterate is the right word to use in the
particular context he provides: he
describes what a minor character has done to a newspaper—taken it apart and
left it much less organized than when he received it. (I now have a word for what my wife accuses
me of doing to the Sunday New York Times.) But the metaphor is one of disembowelment and
evisceration, which is quite a bit more gruesome than the task might otherwise
suggest. Why is this here?
The
appearance of exenterate seems to be
one of many examples in the text where seemingly unconnected and repeated
images subliminally impact the reader’s unconscious. Thomas Ligotti does something similar with
language, indirectly building up an image or mood in the corner of the reader’s
eye—a suggestion of impending gruesomeness and disaster—with what appear to be
incidental, easy to overlook references.
Unobservant readers will find themselves growing increasingly disturbed
by the material, but not know exactly why.
The technique is marvelous when it works, as it does here.
“The Rule
Old Blood” is full of such cleverness, as is the whole collection. There are sly allusions to both H.P. Lovecraft’s
fiction and events in his life. The Necronomicon appears on one character’s “bookshelf
of doom”, alongside the much more treacherous Alibek Codex. At one point the narrator, an investigative
reporter named Jim Scordato, channels Lovecraft’s hatred of New York City, and
of modernity in general. (The story is
set in roughly the same time period—the early 1920s—when Lovecraft experienced
his disastrous sojourn there.) Scordato’s
boss, a stereotypical, hard driving big city editor, is named Munsey, probably
after the Munsey magazines, purveyors of genre fiction that were popular at the
time.
The Mark of the Shadow Grove, and “The Rule of Old Blood” in particular, are full of thought
provoking ideas and troubling insights. There are interesting passages about
class consciousness, labor relations, Freudian psychoanalysis, conventional
religion, matrilineal culture, and Greek mythology. There is some inventive Old Testament
theology concerning whether devils, lacking souls, can directly impregnate
mortal women. (Apparently they can.) It was amusing to read Smeltzer’s critique of
psychoanalysis, and by extension, Freud, in a series of vignettes. The lead character, fearful that he is losing
his mind and succumbing to a death wish, consults an Austrian doctor named
Holzman. Freud’s famous essay The Uncanny—mandatory reading by the way—is
referenced to good effect: the concept of “the double”, and entity that is both
familiar and unfamiliar, is key to the narrator’s fate. A lot to ponder.
Smeltzer
makes frequent use of dream imagery and dream analysis as foreshadowing, and to
mediate some of the back story, taking a cue from Lovecraft and other horror
writers who have done the same. The old
staple of reading a journal—actually two—that
contain ever more bizarre content figures in the narrator’s growing awareness
of his own doom. There is an echo of
Lovecraft’s “The Horror at Red Hook” (1927), sans the xenophobia but suggestive
of subterranean horrors beneath the city’s bright facades. The scenes in which the narrator visits the studio
of Virginia Schiaparelli will remind readers of Lovecraft’s story “Pickman’s
Model” (1927), though Smeltzer’s touch here is a light one.
“The Rule
Old Blood” begins with the lead character being sent by his editor to
investigate the disappearance of a wealthy heir and art collector, a gentleman who
left behind a journal of strange, incoherent entries. He was last seen on his way to meet the
mysterious and alluring Virginia Schiaparelli, an avant-garde artist. She embodies the spirit of a powerful and
independent woman, and becomes by far the most interesting and memorable
character. Scordato’s growing relationship
with this cosmic femme fatale reveals their common history and destiny, and
leads them back to their origins—and a terrifying understanding of their true
nature. Like many Clark Ashton Smith
stories, there is a pleasing symmetry and circularity to Smeltzer’s work. Characters come back to their beginnings, but
completely transformed, and also doomed.
The
three novellas, set in the eighteenth, nineteenth and early twentieth
centuries, interconnect in interesting historical and thematic ways. The author varies the point of view,
alternating between masculine and feminine.
At the climax of the third story Smeltzer radically shifts the view one
last time for a powerful effect. Collectively, the three stories that comprise The Mark of the Shadow Grove are a
masterful updating of the Lovecraftian Mythos, and provide unsettling insights
about the nature of gender differences and humanity’s relationship with the
natural world.
This reviewer has written a deep and insightful review of the incredible book "The Mark of the Shadow Grove." I found his own writing style and understanding illuminating and smart. Loved it.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much! I was especially impressed with how the three novellas interconnect and carry the author's themes forward in time.
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