The Horror at Martin’s Beach (1923) is unique among H.P.
Lovecraft’s numerous collaborations; it was co-written with Sonia Greene, who
would become his wife in 1924—though not for long. When the story originally appeared, it was
given the title The Invisible Monster.
Although he does not get a byline, it was the first appearance of a work
substantially by Lovecraft in Weird Tales,
which began publication in March of 1923.
L.
Sprague de Camp, in his 1975 biography of H.P. Lovecraft, relates how the idea
for the story originated. While visiting
Sonia Green in a small Massachusetts resort town, the two went for a stroll
along the shore on moonlit evening, and heard “a peculiar snorting, grunting
noise, loud in the distance.” Green
suggested this might provide Lovecraft an idea for a story, but he encouraged
her to write one instead. Shortly
afterwards, she produced an outline, which Lovecraft either revised or used to
produce the complete story. S.T. Joshi
classifies the story as a “secondary revision” although Lovecraft’s influence
is pretty obvious.
De Camp
feels that The Horror at Martin’s Beach is
similar in some respects to Ambrose Bierce’s The Damned Thing (1893) and Fitz-James O’Brien’s What Was It? (1859). These well-known
classics both involve invisible entities, one a voracious predator and the other
a mysterious humanoid, but the creature in the Green-Lovecraft effort is more concealed than invisible. The marine setting and reference to the
captured beast becoming exhibited as a seaside tourist attraction recalls
another story, one very similar to J.G. Ballard’s 1964 The Drowned Giant, but appearing much earlier and possibly forming
the basis for the Ballard story.
(In the
story I am remembering, villagers in a seaside town discover a giant male cadaver
just offshore after a storm. The novelty
soon wears off and as the body decays the fisher folk begin to take away pieces
of it for their own use, mutilating and desecrating the corpse. However, the drowned giant’s mate comes to
retrieve the body and drags it back to the ocean depths. As in The
Horror at Martin’s Beach, there is an element of revenge and justice for the
desecration. I have not been able to
identify this story—it was probably published in the late nineteenth to very
early twentieth century. Do any of my
readers know?)
The
beginning of The Horror at Martin’s Beach
is very different in tone and conceptualization than the end. The opening suggests that it will perhaps be
a science fiction story: a strange
creature is captured at sea, and scientists attempt to classify it. The organism has some similarities to more
familiar marine animals and may be some kind of deep sea fish. However, its enormous size and “certain
curious modifications, such as rudimentary forelegs and six-toed feet in place
of pectoral fins” as well as its highly developed brain and weird single eye
indicate a more evolutionarily advanced species. Adding to the mystery is the determination
that the specimen is an infant, only
recently hatched. In short, the horror is
a sea monster, or so readers are led
to believe.
But the
end of The Horror at Martin’s Beach
is more akin to nightmare, and the story reads like the creative reworking of
an item from the author’s dream journal.
It culminates in the single image of a dozen or so men unable to save
themselves from being drawn out to sea and drowned—presumably by the parent of the
infant sea monster. A thunderstorm roars
overhead as spectators on the beach, powerless to help, retreat indoors.
Held
in the clutches of an unknown vise, the line of the damned dragged on; their
silent screams and unuttered prayers known only to the demons of the black
waves and the night wind.
The
narrator imagines the victims in the throes of “all the fright, panic, and
delirium of a malignant universe—all the sorrow, sin, and misery, blasted hopes
and unfulfilled desires, fear, loathing and anguish of the ages since time’s
beginning…” S.T. Joshi identifies the “typical verbal flamboyance” of these
last few paragraphs as indicating that Lovecraft wrote them. The story becomes strongly supernatural and
even mythological in tone, no longer about a sea monster, but an apocalyptic
vision of humankind’s fate. Typical of
Lovecraft’s fatalistic approach to life, victims and spectators passively
accept their powerlessness over events, and merely watch, doing nothing to save
the men or by extension, themselves.
Joshi
was critical of the ending of The Horror
at Martin’s Beach” because in his words “there has been insufficient build
up for it” and “it is inappropriate to
the circumstances,” [his
emphasis]. Certainly the first half of
the story seems awkwardly joined to what follows in the second. Was the disjointedness of the text a result
of Green’s and Lovecraft’s differing and irreconcilable contributions to the
narrative? Is The Horror at Martin’s Beach an example of Lovecraft’s difficulty
making the transition from supernatural horror to more materialistic science
fiction, even early in his career?
The observant
but uninvolved narrator tells readers from the very beginning of the story that
he has “never heard an even approximately adequate explanation of the horror at
Martin’s Beach.” And one is unlikely
given the metaphysical questions underpinning the story. But it has something to do with
hypnotism! He cites a controversial article
published by one Professor Alton around the time of the calamity: “Are Hypnotic Powers Confined to Recognized
Humanity?”
Probably
not.